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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Ugh. I apologise for my lateness. Anyway, here is your review:

I was immediately blown away by this short, but intriguing chapter. I was enthralled after reading the first several paragraphs, and you kept me on my toes for the entire chapter.

This chapter flowed very well as you smoothly transitioned from one thought to the next. Additionally, you seem to have a solid plot, which moved quickly throughout this chapter. This chapter captivated me, pushin me to read the next chapter.

With regards to characterization, I was surprised by your portrayal of Sirius. I don't believe I've read a fanfiction where he was displayed as anxious and uneasy. He ssdms to have strong feelings toward Lindsay, yet unsure of what to do when he is around her. I just want to warn you not to stray too far away from J.K. Rowling's portrayal of Sirius in the books.

Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for this review! This is just how I see the young Sirius, but don't worry, he'll go normal in the end. Hopefully. ;)
Thanks again! You rock!
-Lucky

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