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Review:luciusobsessed says:
I think this is the most intense chapter so far.

First off, let me start with this. When I read this story, I can feel everything Andromeda is feeling, if that makes sense. I feel like I'm in her shoes, experiencing every happy moment, every darkness, every ounce of pain. I swear I'm about to cry after reading this chapter.

'Cissy wore a pale blue dress that made her a picture of tragic innocence, while Bella’s passionate red drew the eye.' I must say that I absolutely love this description. It says so many things, and I read it over a few times because it had such a nice flow to it.

I know this is random, but I hope that behind the scenes, Lucius experienced jealousy that he wasn't Narcissa's escort. Sorry, but as "luciusobsessed" I must put the word in :p

Anyways, I absolutely abhor Rabastan. He is such a prick! I expected him to say something hurtful to her, but not that hurtful! He completely crossed the line and really showed his true colors. It really made me feel so sad, and I wish I could save Andromeda from all of this, but then again, that's what Ted is for :)

Please update soon, I'm dying to read what happens next!! xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for another wonderful review! I am so glad you like my description; I always feel like that is what I struggle with the most!

Andromeda, for me, is the most amazing character I've written. She suddenly just jumped off the page for me, and my writing has improved because of it!

I am a Lucius fan too, I've always thought he was just so suave. And I may explore a little of your idea in the next chapter :)

And yes, Rabastan is just horrible. I wondered whether he was a bit too nasty, but I feel his nastiness comes from a superiority complex, and his extreme arrogance, so it would have been fine (in his mind) to just say those things to Andromeda!

The next chapter is written, and I will upload it now!

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