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Review:ms4aisa says:
Hi! really interesting and well written chapter! :) I'm excited about an update :)

but I have to mention something: you got quite a few dates/numbers/ages/whatever confused.. :/ If Rose's birthday was in October, she'd be a year behind Al and Scorpius, or already 17..
and when you talked about Lily "ten years back", you wrote, she'd be 9, and Rose barely 11, so that doesn't make sense when they're both still in school now.

I'm really sorry for pointing it out!! I just think the quality of the chapter will improve if you edit/correct it. I hope you don't take it the wrong way and aren't mad at me :(

really, the plot seems interesting and also really funny, good work on that! :)

Author's Response: Oh thanks! I'm sorry about that! I'll fix it! Gosh! How could I have missed those! Thanks so much!

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