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Review:starryskies55 says:
*comes bearing your HPPC Supreme Review*

This was such a touching piece, and I am so glad I snagged this to podcast :)

You've done a fantastic job of writing this, it flows beautifully and the emotion seeps out of every word. One of the things I liked most about this, is how canon it seems. Lucius and Narcissa are one of my favourite pairings, and I love seeing them so sad and hopeless.

The characterisation of Narcissa was great, her loneliness and sadness was really well portrayed, and I like how you made both her and Lucius seem mortal and flawed, as sometimes I feel writers make one solely good and the other evil, but you've not fallen into this trap! Awesome ;)

Finally, I just really liked this piece. The emotion and imagery was great, the only CC I could give is to revise your punctuation in dialogues. I hope I do this justice on HPPC!

- Jenny

Author's Response: *loves the HPPC supreme shop of awesome*

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so happy that you took up this piece to podcast too xD Thanks!

I am glad you found this touching, and that you found it to have a good flow and full of emotion. I am flattered that you found this canon enough, thank you! Haha I love reading and writing about them being sad and hopeless too (how mean of me)!

Wow, I am so happy to know that you feel both my characters are moral and flawed, and you liked their portrayal :)

Thanks so much for your comments, I will surely look at the punctuation! And I am definitely sure you'll do a great job with the storycast! Thank you!


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