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Review:Rhia says:
Let me just start by saying this: i love your story. I started it a long time ago, back when there were only four chapters, and yesterday I stumbled upon it again. I was overjoyed that you had completed it! The one person I feel lacks something, would have to be Adrian. He is such an important person to Helga, who is such a huge charactar in the story, and i feel like he could be a little bit more realistic. He found his love with somone else, and he forgave her so easily? Believe me, I want him to forgive her, it just doesnt feel like he even listened o her explanation before absolving her of guilt. Anyway, thats all, that one tinsy little thing :) keep up the amazing writing, I'll be reading!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love it when I have constructive criticism! Adrian and Helga I honestly found the most difficult characters to write, because they were the characters with the least amount of flaws.

Godric could be proud, Rowena aloof, Salazar jealous, Malfoy spiteful, but Helga and Adrian were the "innocents" in this story. Thank you so much for your review, I hope it will help me build on things later!

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