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Review:Calypso says:
Aww this made me smile a lot- it was so sweet! And brought across a strong father/daughter relationship really well :)

You did a really good job of defying your cliche! I thought Ron's reaction to Rose's relationship with Scorpius was far more reasonable and realistic than you sometimes find. It was so nice to read a loving parent reacting level-headedly rather than flying off the handle, and to be honest, I think Ron is more likely to have reacted like this, especially in his middle age :P

I thought the first conversation that Ron and Rose had really sweet, the things he said sounded just like what a concerned father might say and want to talk about with his daughter. Also I liked that they had a special thing (the broom rides) that they did together, that was a nice touch :)

There were a couple of parts that made me laugh out loud- the bit where Rose told him she'd kissed her boyfriend and also the bit where she told him who her boyfriend was and then kicked off on her broom. Also loved the little bits of Romione- they really made me smile!

I did think that Ron was maybe acting a little overprotective when he talked about not rushing into things and getting hurt, but I suppose as they had such a close relationship, it was natural for him to want to be looking out for her. I also thought that it was a little bit cliche to have Rose having inherited her mother's brains AND her the Weasley Quidditch skills.

Still, this was a really well written piece with a very realistic and very sweet relationship between Ron and Rose, which I really enjoyed reading! I felt the last sentence really summed up the whole piece and was a great sentiment to have.
-Calypso

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