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Review:lilypotterfan123 says:
AMBER! This chapter was beautifully written, I just wanted to cry and cry and cry for Dorcas and her sister. When she was holding Amber in her arms, I could just picture the scene unfolding and all the angst coming to life.

I think Dorcas trusted her little sister a bit too much with that task, and put her in too much danger. If she had seen her instead of leaving her with a dissolusion charm to run round the place maybe things would have gone better. But in this situation it worked so I just blame Dorcas a little bit.

How will her Mother take this news?! I see a family argument coming in a chapter soon... well that's what I predict, I guess I'll have to read on to find out won't I!

Mad Eye, he even found a way to seem emotional which is weird but it was surprisingly in character! I am really impressed with how you managed to do that.

So btw, I hope you don't mind what I did. I'm a DA digest editor over at TDA and they have a recommendations page in the digest and that was my job. So I recommended this fic as it is my absolute favourite at he minute and I could think of nothing else!

10/10 again and such a hauntingly beautiful chapter,

Bex :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the AMAZING review!

I know, poor Amber! I feel so badly for Dorcas as well!

You know, I bet there must have been a better plan for getting Amber out, but Dorcas didn't see it at the time. So instead she hid her sister and told her to run away. I think that her true mistake was telling Amber how dangerous the green was, especially knowing how intelligent the little girl is. So when she saw it heading towards Dorcas, she only knew that she didn't want her sister hurt.

Her doesn't all really come to a head next chapter, but it does eventually. I have that scene all written, it was one of the first ones I wrote of this story!

I didn't want to make Mad Eye all super emotional because that's just not him, you know? But he also couldn't be completely cold. I'm glad you liked the balance.

Oh my goodness, I'm so honored that you like my story that much! I appreciate it more than you could ever know!



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