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Review:Jasmine says:
Oh mah Glob.

Please tell me you're going to post the next chapter for this wonderful peice of artwork soon or I swear on that glorious reference of One Direction you made, I will explode.

But beside that! Lovely start on this story. I can already predict I'll be peeing my pants over whatever shenanigans, hilarity and general mischief that is bound to happen and highly expected for your OC, Charlotte.

And speaking of your OC, even with just two chapters it's safe to say I already fell in love with her; flaming hair and sarcastic comments included. She so obviously is the patron of all the countless angst indulged and horrid luck hoarders everywhere. And by that I mean every teenage girl known to man.

And that's why I think your OC is just so fantabulous! But oh sweet Jesus, there's a lot of quotes that I love so far, such as: "Hold ma hoops gurlfriend", basically all of Ian's by far genius commentary, and "Was I just called bitchacha? Ian has been spending way too much time with Ellie and her 'learn Spanish in a day' videos."

Just 'cos I take Spanish and I like calling people bitchachos. So, Ian is obvi ma spirit animal..

So, in conclusion, I just really can't wait to see how this story develops and how the plot thickens! Hopefully you update soon! :D


Author's Response: HAI JASMINE! yes i will be. in fact, chapter 3 is all done (just needs to be HEAVILY edited).

I hope i can fufill your lovely expectations! Awrh that's an amazing line. "Patron of angst". You're too cool. I may just have to use that somewhere ;) (After crediting you, 'course)

Tell me about it! As a teenage girl i just felt it was my duty to share my story with the world. This tale comes after years of pent up rage and angst at the world.

I'm sure you'll be able to relate to me :)

Oh i think you're fantabulous! Ian's commentary is one of my favourite things to write :)


I totally think you two should get married. cough, if that was possible, cough.

Hahaha, i will very soon! Chapter 3 is done by needs fixing!

Thank you for the lovely review :)

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