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Review:Darla says:
I stayed up until the wee hours of the day finishing this and eating leftover Birthday Cake to keep me awake, but I was too tired to leave a review so I'm doing it now. Here it is:

First of all, I hope you enjoyed your vacation even if it was socially awkward amidst the future in-laws.

I think I know how Hannah's feeling. Like someone just punched you in the gut with a cactus and keeps twisting it deeper whenever you see that one person with someone else. I'm starting to understand how she's feeling now and I'm becoming more empathetic towards her.

I'm so happy Hannah finally grew the lady balls to tell Scorpius that he isn't good for her and she doesn't want to be with him at all anymore! YAY for her epiphany! Those things are great. And YAY for Winky for ratting out Fred. She's my new favorite magical creature.

I hope Scorpius fixes everything with Rose because they both deserve to be happy and I can't picture him with anyone else ever since they became my new favorite couple.

I'm kinda pissed at Fred for trying to make Hannah jealous (even though she sort f deserves it) but it's easy to see why he did it. It's definitely working, but now I'm just ready for him to get his head out of his butt and talk to Hannah although I wouldn't blame him if he still has trust issues.

Emmy is also pissing me off. I feel bad for Teddy, but if she can't get past those old prejudices then he deserves better. I love that you have good subplots that keep me even more interesting. I enjoy the complexity that comes along with having a little story on the side. It makes me feel extra attached to the characters because I have grown especially fond of them and these updates are always fun to read.

Unfortunately you did have some typos so just look out for those, but it was nothing major so don't stress it. Keep doin what you do because you're doing a lovely job of it^_^

Author's Response: Hey Darla!

SEND ME SOME CAKE! Was it your birthday? Happy Birthday!!

And yes.. it was a little awkward around the future in-laws, but I managed to go ten days without calling my boyfriend's mom by her first name, or by 'mom' so I think it was a win for me :D

Oh good! Hopefully as these next few chapters progress her emotions to make her from that 'other girl' to someone that we can sympothize with. That's my goal, anyway :) We'll see how that works out!

All thanks to Minky, Hannah's finally going to clear her concious one person at time! And she totally ratted Fred out, but it was worth it! :D

I can't answer that next part, spoilers ;)

Oh, it is definitely working perfectly on Hannah. It's his way of dealing with things and while we - on the outside reading - can see it's obviously not going to help things, he can't see that yet.

Emmy is from one of those 'some things never change' families. If more of them were alive, I could see them being very similar to the Black family. And she's still pretty young, so she needs the support from her parents. Teddy may deserve better, but he doesn't want better, he wants her. Anyway! I'm glad you are enjoying their little story. I love writing their drama into this because I love writing Teddy so much :)

I will keep an eye out for the typos :) thank you for letting me know!

Oh, Darla! I have a new story going up in a few days.. It's going to be called 'Triple Chocolate Frog' and it's going to be a James II/original character - I'd love to hear your opinion of it if you had time to read it/were interested.

Thank you for the lovely review! I always love hearing your opinions :) ♥


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