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Review:bookworm530 says:
Very intense... bravo!! I am interested to see where this genetics study is going and why Harry's powers were going out of control. I hope to see Draco save Hermione from the hit on her...4 chapters and no interaction from the "couple"...gonna keep us hanging?? Update soon!!

Author's Response: The genetics and Harry's power fluctuation will be revealed in the course of this story. I might do a whole 'interlude' chapter of Hermione explaining all the technicalities of genetics to a Pureblood. This would make it so people who don't like that sort of technical stuff can skip it, and people who want to see my scientific reasoning behind it can read it.

Hah, hah. I'm sorry about that! This story so far is more action/adventure than romance. I'm not being very thoughtful right now of Dramione fans. However, Draco and Hermione will finally meet in the sixth chapter. Hermione needed a few chapters to start accepting that Ron's broken up with her, anyway. Plus, I didn't want to dive too far into the story in the first chapter. I wanted to set up The Department, Draco's mission, and Hermione's new goal without confusing readers too much.

Thanks so much for your review! I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying this story! My next chapter has gone to my beta's capable hands, and I'll hopefully have it up by later this week. :)

Aether


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