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Review:Lily says:
Wow, what a well-written, dramatic chapter! I just love the way you contrast things because it really adds to the story. Like how you started with how the burrow was a beautiful place where pain almost doesn't exist (really great description) and the warmth of her moment with Al...and then finished with Bella feeling so much pain that she unknowingly begs Rose to kill her, a perversion of all that the burrow stands for...really amazing. Bella has such a depth of emotion that she doesn't feel like an ordinary character which is why it's so easy to be dragged in to this story.
I think you are a great story teller and I hope you keep writing!

Author's Response: aw you're so sweet, that seriously made my day! haha the burrow is an amazing place so it seemed like the ideal time to describe another of bella's nightmares ;)

actually it's quite funny because bella's personality is one that i haven't quite figured out. she doesn't have a certain trait that stands out for her, like jade or scorpius, but she just works in a certain way - i hope that makes sense ;)

thank you so much love! x

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