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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Here with another review!

I really liked this chapter and I thought it carried over well from the previous chapter. I liked the meeting between Katherine and Pierre. He is an interesting fellow and I wish he would have divulged a bit more information about her mother and thre Prewetts. I did find it funny thought that the connection between Molly Prewett Weasley hadn't been made.

I also really like how you are keeping the story up and going with the times of the third book, but with your own flare to the entire story line. It is fresh and exciting to see things from other characters points of view.

The description was really well done in this chapter as well as the last one. I love being able to fall into the wonderful world that you are describing so perfectly. It really gives me a great sense of what you are imagining. The flow of the story was also better. I liked how it seemed to just mesh all together. The characterization of everyone was great in this chapter. Katherine is really shining here.

Overall, I love the characterization, plot development, the mystery into Katherine's mothers past and all the underlying details the entwine themselves together throughout the entire chapter and story.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Hullo!

The connection between Molly and her brothers will be made soon, Pierre doesn't really mention it because after a while he assumes she already knows.

Thank you! I'll soon be done with the POA timeline and hopefully the GOF timeline will be just as enjoyable.

Really I have loads of trouble with description so I'm happy to see I've gotten better and that Katherine is shining :)

Thank you!


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