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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I am finally here with your review!

I must say that I really enjoyed this chapter. I really like the way that you characterize the Weasley twins. They are just these two comical guys who can never get enough of a good laugh and that is shown well here. I also like the way that your portray Katherine. She has so much going on all at once and sometimes it can be hard to follow.

I was a bit confused when she was talking to George and the Alicia and then she was writing a letter and then Lee jumped into the conversation. I think maybe you could seperate it more to make it flow a little better? This is just a suggestion.

I also really like the way that you keep this building mystery going. I can feel the plot progress so nicely. I also like the subtle use of descriptions. They are sprinkled throughout and don't over power the chapter at all.

Keep up the great writing! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Hello sorry for the late response.

I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter, wow the twins are probably one of the hardest characters to get right so thank you for the compliment :)

I'm sorry for the confusion and I'll take a look at the chapter again. Description is a huge problem for me so I'm glad you think i did that well.

Thank you! I will keep my writing up :)


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