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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there! I am finally here with your review! Sorry it has taken me awhile to get to.

I really like this chapter and this story as a whole. I like seeing it based more around Roxanne, Molly, and Lucy. I am sure that the others will make an appearance, but it is really cool to see them in the spotlight right now.

I love the subtle descriptions that you use throught the chapter. They are strong and really help me picture everything that you are describing. The flow of this chapter is great and the pace is well balanced. I didn't feel rushed while reading it and I never felt lost.

I really feel for Roxanne in the story, but I know since she is a Weasley she is going to stay strong. I am curious to know how the other members of her family are going to react when they find out she is having a baby and I am curious to see if she even tells the father.

Overall, this is some great writing and I love the story line, characters, the way you characterize them and bring them to life. This is a hard topic to discuss and I am glad that you are handling it with such grace.

Keep up the awesome writing!!! =)


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