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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

Well, well, well! Look who has decided to give me something else to read? Thank you so much! Not that you wrote this solely for my pleasure but its so good to see something else from you that I swear you did it just for me! Or maybe I'm just an arrogant toe-rag...Hahahaha.
Anyway, it was a pleasant surprise hearing things from Scorpy's POV. I was always curious to know how his feelings for Roxanne developed and can I just gloat on the fact that he is hilarious and completely likeable? His sense of humor is great and that last bit when he squealed and changed it into a manly grunt was so hilarious that I almost burst out laughing. How horrifying for him though, to think that he fancies that Roxanne Weasley...with her gorgeous looks and such. Hahahaha. Loved all the contradictions in his thoughts as well, it was a great read! Tormented! :D
There were just a few grammar things, I think you missed a quotation or something from Vivian in the beginning but other than that it was a really great to see her again as well (Until you update for her again, hint hint).
Can't wait for more! And don't feel bad for starting another story when you have so much work to do, I do it all the time! :D
P.S.: My laptop, hopefully shall be fixed this coming week and I'll be quick with the updates! :D
Much love,

Author's Response: Ah, hello again,

Tehe, you're welcome. I think this was mainly because I just missed Scorp and Roxie so much, so it was predominantly for my pleasure but I'm so happy you liked it. Haha yes you are! :P
I was curious too, I always had a rough idea but this way I can really figure him out. Yay, you like him! He is really different to Roxanne so I wasn't sure if you would but I think he balances her out and they are just... well, perfect. For each other. Oh, I laughed while writting that, don't worry - he's just a boy going through puberty, he can't help it :L
His thoughts here are in a complete muddle bless him, he just cannot accept the fact that Roxanne is gorgeous and he hates her, it just doesn't make sense.
Yeah, I spotted that and will go and change it sometime :L this means we get to see Scorp's thought on the whole Vivian and Potterheads situation (haha I sound like Zabini). She's coming back soon but things are kind of at a low point for her, with her mum and all so it's not exactly a happy chapter, funerals are never happy.
I just can't help myself! They just keep pouring out from me! I even have a few stories for the next NEXT generation lined up! (I actually love them, they are like my own babies :L) Isn't that shocking! Can't wait for your stories!

With love,
GirlOnTheSidelines x

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