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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Well, my dear I am back to read more of this addicting story and I'm so glad that this update appeared! I'd been wondering why I hadn't heard anything from you or seen the updates but that's because I hadn't added it to my favorites! How dare I! :p
Anyway, now that that is over, I have to say that this was the funniest and sweetest chapter thus far! Even more so than the one before when he proposed to Fleur! Hahaha. I think his misgivings about how his family felt about the whole thing were great but Bill is just so confident! Its really something to see, especially when Ginny was exploding with rage about the fact that he was marrying Fleur in the first place.
Hilarious! And might I say that I enjoyed George's comment about them thinking Bill was pregnant? I am a George-lover after all and he is simply the greatest, not that Fred's rude comment about Fleur wasn't hilarious either, because it was. :D
Not that this was important or anything but I did enjoy learning where Errol came from, I'd never heard anyone give much detail into him. And the fact that you've put so much time into what's going on in the Wizarding world, plus the anxiety that darn Voldemort was bringing onto the situation was very well written. So I applaud you extra loudly and I hope everyone can hear me! :D Excellent piece of work and that last paragraph brought on some uhm, wariness because we know that Fleur isn't going to be welcomed in with open arms.er, not exactly.
Can't wait for what you do next! It'd be great getting to know Fleur's reaction to the rest of the Weasley clan!
Much love,
Gabbie
P.S.: Laptop is still down but hopefully will be fixed by this week? Hoping for it! Anyway, I'll be going back to "This is Audrey Tang" and my story about George when I finish uploading for other stories so it'd be great to chat again! Until then!

Author's Response: Hey there!

I'm glad you liked this chapter, I definitely enjoyed writing it the most, and found it the easiest to write as well! As much as I have now come to love Fleur, it is fun to get back to just the good old Weasleys! I thought it would be fun to explore the Weasleys' reactions to Fleur whenever they're on their own. Of course poor Ron is such star-struck and the twins are making jokes (as a fellow George lover, i felt like I just had to give him some good jokes!) but I wanted to show Ginny's anger and also Molly and Arthur's reactions.

I'm glad you liked the details about the War. it's easy to be caught up in all of Bill and Fleur's lovey-dovey attitudes, but this chapter takes place just before Half Blood prince starts, so old Voldy is well and truly back!

Next chapter will be up very shortly, and you will get to see Fleur's, er, happiness at her newfound family! I can't wait for your laptop to finally be fixed!!


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