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Review:Analesh7 says:
For a prologue I thought this is really well written. From the beginning I didn't really know who was talking but once I got the end it all connected. The emotions and thoughts were right on cue with Remus. Remus has always been shunned by society because of how he is different and considered dangerous but he finally found that acceptance from his friends. So when you included this line "You have no idea what itís like to have someone whom you are willing to die for torn away from you so abruptly, let alone three people. Their absence from my life was like a blow to the face. It had seemed that my world had shattered into a million tiny fragments, which seemed to pierce my heart in my every waking moment" I saw how his life would be forever changed because the true people who saw past what he was, was now gone.

Great job! Heading off to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm glad to see that you enjoyed the prologue, which was a bit of a challenge for me to write. I wanted to keep readers in the dark with regards to the narrator until the end of the chapter, so it appears as if I have succeeded.

Thank you for the review,
Voldy Needs a Hug

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