Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:lia_2390 says:
Whoa.

Snape? Alive? In America? Hold the phone!

I know I've told you this a million times, but I am so jealous of your descriptive skills. I love how real they are, and how well I can picture them without trying so hard.

Salem is a wonderful choice for the setting based on history alone. I imagine it was fun to write how the American wizards go about their business compared to the English. I usually don't read or find fics which are based across the pond, but I think I will love this one.

The end went a bit fast for me. I didn't expect her to stumble upon him so quickly, or that he would actually show himself - in classic Snape-like fashion. I did like Hermione's reaction - her shock, and disbelief, and the fact that he can still make her feel like she's a teenager again and he's standing over her in his Potions classroom. How can she be absolutely sure that this man is indeed Severus Snape?

I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us with this! I think you did a good job with this chapter :)

Lia

Author's Response: Hi, Lia! Thanks so much for your review! Yes, this plot bunny was rather virulent and attached itself to Rin's challenge. :) Great point regarding whether she can be sure of his identity -- I will have to address that one. I also appreciate the comment that the chapter is a little rushed, it felt rushed to me too. Thanks so much for your comment on the description :) (that is something I love about your writing as well btw)

Mary


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 470
Submit Report: