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Review:Snitchsista says:
I came across this story again because I've seen it come up a lot on this site and I think it was in my favourites list (if it's not it's going in!) and the reason why is because it is so realistic.

The Dramione relationship is amazing in this :) It's very genuine, it's very realistic. In life, romance doesn't just happen over night and I can't tell you how many stories I've read where Draco and Hermione are kissing on page one. I just will never understand why authors think that's realistic.

Anywhoo, I really like how this is going and I want to know why Draco was upset! That's going to pester me I can tell. The Cormac twist is great as well. God I love fanfiction, I'd forgotten how much I've been working on my original lol

I really liked this bit:

Hey Hermione, how was the rest of your night?” Ron asked me from across the table. If I had known he was there I would have sat somewhere else especially since his new girlfriend was sitting right next to him, practically on top of him.

“Hello Harry. Did you have a good evening?” I asked turning to him, ignoring Ron’s question.

That was so in character, I remember now, this is set HBP era isn't it? It's all coming back to me now, the 'new girlfriend' is Lavender lol

Keep writing this

Author's Response: It's so hard to write a realistic Dramione and I'm trying to make this one that way! Yeah I'm not sure why authors think that having two people who dont like each other kissing on page one is realistic either, unless its one in which they start in the middle of the story and then jump back to the beginning. Yep this starts in hbp and goes into dh which i'm almost to dh i think i have about three or so more chapter left of hbp! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this and thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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