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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
I enjoyed the delicate touch you gave to the romance writing in this chapter. You made Gilderoy and Regulus very believable as a couple, both in their physical interactions and in Gilderoy's anxiety about knowing he will never be accepted by the Black family. Gilderoy (surprisingly for his character as seen in the books when he's mostly a buffoon) has a keen understanding of his lover's motivations, I especially appreciated how you pointed out that Regulus became closer to Gilderoy as his relationship with Sirius disintegrated and went away entirely. That made me feel for Regulus, who was the "good son" in his family's eyes; Sirius's rejection must have hurt him deeply.

I laughed when Gilderoy thought of Sirius as a "four month old Labrador" bumbling around -- once a dog, always a dog I guess!

The descriptions are lovely --- "that odd smell he can never quite place but loves nonetheless, a combination of mint and fresh cream and spice" is a wonderful combination of phrases. Beautiful job writing a romantic scene with just the right level of detail, I'm glad you will be continuing this!

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