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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
Hi! I very much enjoyed Clio's tangle with Snape. I think you hit the balance of snarky and ever so slightly helpful that he would have with a fellow staff member. (as long as that staff member wasn't a werewolf! -- then again, he did brew the Wolfsbane potion for Remus in the books, though probably only to ensure the students' and Harry's safety). Whatever else he does, Snape does take his job as professor seriously.

I loved the descriptions of the photographs drying their wings like butterflies -- very nice. You detailed the darkroom right down to the smell and that brought the whole scene together.

Mechanical notes: I believe "rubric" is spelled with a C, and generally in the books, spoken spells are capitalized. (Patronus, etc)

I loved Clio's swim with the female professors. I always thought Sprout would be a fun person to be friends with :) it's really fun for me to see Hogwarts through Clio's eyes! Thanks for a fun chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing! :) Spelling is definitely not my strongest suit. I hadn't noticed the capitalization thing with the spells; so thanks for pointing that out! I will have to go back through and fix those (eep,I think there's quite a few more of those hiding about).

I'm really glad you liked the interaction with Snape - there is a point several chapters ahead where she tells him it's "nice" of him to make the wolfsbane potion, and he makes it crystal clear that he's not doing it for Lupin's sake.

I like Professor Sprout a lot -- Professor McGonagall too, but Sprout I think would definitely be more fun to hang out with. :)

I'm glad you continue to enjoy this story!

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