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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
This story never fails to make my day! ♥ And this chapter was just completely amazing! I just love love love love it so much!

I thought it was really cute and sweet and I was just squealing for a good five minutes! I didn't really see his 'proposal' coming because it always seemed to me that you like to take your stories slowly. (Not that I'm saying I don't like it or anything. I actually love your story with all my heart!) So yeah, I guess you shocked me a lot there, but nevertheless I still enjoyed it.

Venn Selwyn better defeat all of his challengers in that jousting tournament! If it's any help, I'm completely rooting for him! I'm wondering…is he going to secure his victory by using magic or is he going to be noble? Hm. I wonder….

Right now, I don't feel like Rowena has really sorted out her feelings yet. I think she's a bit doubtful about Venn and her feelings for him, but then again maybe it's just me. Meh.

Anyway, I thought this was a really good chapter, as always! I love the fantastic imagery and the kingdom's 'offering' to St. John! That was really clever! ♥

Looking forward to chapter 8,
Izzy xx

Author's Response: Hi Izzy! Thanks for stopping by :)

Yeah, that may have been another instance of Venn being a bit impulsive. I figure that such a trait might be related to his ultimate downfall, so I've been trying to play it up here and there. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though, and were pleasantly shocked!

Yes, he had better do that! (I'm rooting for him too, obvs.) You raise an interesting point. Being a Slytherin, somehow I doubt that he would play it straight and narrow the whole way. I guess we'll have to see :)

I don't think it's just you. The fact that he's related to Salazar, and that Salazar suggested the possibility of a union between Venn and Helena, has most likely not escaped her notice. Then again, it wouldn't be much of a story if everyone was perfectly on board, right?

I'm glad the imagery worked well - I've been trying to make it less heavy-handed, so hopefully it came across that way. I'm also pleased to see that the religious and historical aspects seemed to fit in okay with the main plot.

Thanks for another lovely review!

-Amanda


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