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Review:CharlieDay says:
Hi, It's me here with your requested review!
I really liked this, it flowed beautifully, and I understood it really well. It was very simple, yet very very powerful. Stylistically, it actually quite reminded me of JKR's writing.
I also thought it was a very unusual concept, as Petunia is not very often written in fanfic, although she is a fascinating character.
This was not only a very good story, there were very few problems with it. The only things I thought were that although your dialogue was very good, there was a lot of it, and though I personally don't mind it some people aren't such big fans. However, I think that dialogue was really the whole point of this one-shot, so that doesn't really matter. The other main issue was not a big thing, but at one point you say 'sorry (word which I'm not allowed to say in a review)' isn't really much of a british expression... I don't know, you could think about changing that.
Both Petunia and Lily were extremely well characterised, and Petunia was particularly good. I think the last line just perfected her character. The way she sort of cut of her nose to spite her face was perfect.
Overall this was a very wistful fic, and I am very glad to have had the chance to read it.
Charlie

Author's Response: Thank you for stopping by!

I'm so glad you think it flowed well. That's usually my biggest issue, so that's a relief.

I agree that there is a lot of dialogue, but like you said, it is necessary. And I'll have to look for that expression and see if there is a way I can fix it.

Thank you so much!

~Cassie


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