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Review:XxImAgInAiReXx says:
Weeel,

I think it's really good. For your first chapter ever and all (congrats, by the way!). The spacing's a little off. And make sure you start a new paragraph when another person speaks. For example:

Instead of

"Blah blah blah." Said Alex. "Blah blah blah." Responded Dominique. "Blah blah blah." Rose said.

Try

"Blah blah blah." Said Alex.

"Blah blah blah." Responded Dominique.

"Blah blah blah." Said Rose.

Not the best example ever, I know, but do you get what I mean?

Author's Response: I think I get it, thank you for commenting on it and helping me grow. Thanks a lot for reading!

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