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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
At first I was a little confused because I thought I was still reading from Rose's pov but then after reading the first part again, I realized that I was reading in Lily's pov and then from there things began falling into place. I really enjoyed seeing this from her perspective, to see how she thinks and feels about such things and feels like she is the only person in her family who does want to secure a marriage. This chapter was done really well and we are getting to the start of the ball and I'm so excited to see what happens! You're doing a great job with keeping my interest in something that is based on a classic so great job with that as well! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: The POV change was a bit of a risk, and I've checked to make sure that there is a clear marker to show that it's Lily's perspective for this chapter. They are so different in their ways of seeing the world that it could get confusing to switch. But I am glad to hear that including her perspective did work out in the end. I needed to explore her character for myself, and it's fantastic that readers have enjoyed it.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this story! :D


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