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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Another chapter that was so well done! The description in this was just absolutely wonderful and in particular it really worked during the description of Scoripus and his robes. I love the balance that there is between Lily and Rose and can't wait to see more interactions between them.

I just found one small mistake in this chapter and it was here: " then Rose had more than half a mind to run off to join her Uncle Charles in Roumania." I think its supposed to be Romania instead of Roumania unless thats how it was spelt in this time frame.

Once more I really liked this chapter and thought it did a great job to keep my interest in the story. I'm excited to see more interactions between the different characters, not just Lily and Rose but also their parent's and Scropius as well. Looking forward to seeing the ball! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm squeeing over your set of reviews for this story - they're definitely setting me at ease about how the plot, characters, and style are developing and settling into place. I'm especially glad that the story is keeping you interested and, better yet, excited! ^_^

I've fixed up that spelling error. Some countries have so many spellings depending on the language you're using that I often get confused - but you're right, Romania is the proper English spelling. :D

Your point about Lily and Rose balancing each other out is wonderful news - the characterization of Lily could easily run into trouble for being too cliched, but I with the two witches, I want to show two sides to this story, two narratives that will reflect upon and intertwine with each other.


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