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Review:daretodream says:
I was hoping you would have Charlie make the Gideon connection!

I just knew that Molly would talk about her two younger brothers, it is such an in character thing for her to do. If Charlie heard the name Gideon, I knew his uncle's name would come to mind for him.

So Gideon Prewett, I'm definitely convinced that he is Phoebe's father. But her mother is still a mystery. Obviously, she isn't anyone good, or else she wouldn't have given Phoebe up right?

I love that Molly found the picture in Gideon's pocket. So she knows that Phoebe is out there, she just doesn't know where or who she is. Oh! So much potential in this story, I love it!

Keep up the good work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Charlie, isnt dumb and I really dont want him to be and he deserves to be in the know, so despite him having no clue he had to make the connection about his uncle. And despite molly not actually being in the scene, I felt that she had to mentioned! Im so glad you think it was in character, I hoped it would be because she values family a lot doesnt she.

Well this chapter was basically saying, Gideon is the dad, but Phoebe doesnt want him to be because hes dead and she always wanted to meet her parents, together. She has this very stereotypical image of a traditional family, father working and mother not as well as them both being together. However, because Gideon is dead that dreams already broken.

Well perhaps, her mother had honest intentions when giving her up, couldnt provide? Couldnt offer her something Heather and John could have perhaps because in chapter one the mother was looking for the best house for Phoebe to live in - maybe they had everything she thought was best for her daughter.

Well Molly is under the impression that shes looking for a three year old because its 1981 when Gideon dies and he has a picture of a baby, and Molly thinks that the baby must have been born. So she doesnt know where to look. She expects them to start at Hogwarts in Ginnys year.

Thanks again, these reviews mean the world to me!

Bex :D


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