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Review:daretodream says:
I love the title of your story in relation to the plot, I think that Heritage was such a fitting name, and yet not a mouthful either! (I love one word titles)

Phoebe is now going to be on a mission to find out more about her parents, isn't she? I can't even blame her, I would want to know as well. I'm predicting that Dumbledore is who she is going to try to find it out from (but I can't imagine she will find out anything that he doesn't want to reveal!)

I love Tonks and how clumsy she is. Such a nice job sticking to a canon fact given to us by JK, making her such a clutz. I'm glad you have that present even in her childhood.

Another fabulous chapter!

~Cassie

Author's Response: I had to get heritage in there somewhere, and this seemed like a perfect opportunity and its true that short titles for something like this are better, but then I do have to explain whats going on with a larger summary, balances it out you know.

Phoebe definitely is, and after chapter 5 youll see how determined she is! I know shes 11 and seems quiet but I know my OC and I know that shes one determined little girl and will stop at nothing! Who she will find more information from is a mystery but all I can say is dont underestimate this kid!

Another great review, thanks muchly!
Bex :)


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