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Review:daretodream says:
I love that you are incorporating the other characters that we already know and love into your story about your OC! It helps to put everything (including the time period) into perspective!

So Phoebe is off to Hogwarts! How exciting! I also love that she is a Hufflepuff! It seems to me that OC's are never Ravenclaws or Hufflepuffs, so I think those two houses are seriously underrated!

It was so funny that Phoebe wasn't getting all of the magical references, like to Dumbledore and Squibs. You kept her very much in character that way, because she would have no idea about any of those things, having been raised entirely muggleborn!

Great work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Phoebe is definitely a hufflepuff, shes caring but not brave and no one knows her blood status yet so putting her in slytherin might make people think shes a pureblood...if she is. Is she? Youll have to read on haha...

Tonks is like one of my favourite characters to write, you dont know whats going to happen next with her, so you can imagine what its like trying to get inside her head! Charlie as well, he tries to show how grown up he is but really, he is very immature but wants to prove it to everyone that hes not.

I liked writing that part because otherwise, Phoebe understanding wouldnt have made it realistic because shes no Hermione Granger is she?

Thank youuu!
Bex :)


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