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Review:daretodream says:
Oh, I feel so badly for Phoebe! It must be so immensely difficult leaving behind everything that you know and love to join a new world where you know nothing. I can't even imagine what she is going through.

I'm so intrigued that Professor McGonagall knows about Phoebe's parents but has been instructed not to tell her. I can't help but wonder why? Is she the hiddden away child of two Order Members? Death Eaters? I don't know, but I'm interested in finding out!

Poor Heather also seems to be struggling with this transition, no? I can understand how it would be hard to raise someone else's child who is so special and so different from your own.

Nice work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Another review Cassie! I always feel sorry for Phoebe when I look over this chapter for notes and such. McGonagall knows what Dumbledore knows and how he knows, well its a mystery ;)
Shes hiding it to protect Phoebe I think but she has other reasons - which by now you know. Heather, I dont like her at all. To me she doesnt seem to grasp the concept of love and thinks her life is so hard but you know theres always someone worse off than yourself.
Thank you so much again!
Bex :)


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