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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
For only 500 words you did such a geat job of getting the emotions of fear across very well. I really liked that you didn't use any names until the very end and that is really the only way you knew who it was we were reading about was when she states Draco's name. I thought you did a great job with the oneshot and portraying a mothers fear for her son both when he was unborn and after as the war is going on around them. Also I loved how you added in the line that the cause would never be as important as her boy's life which tied this story into the books very well! I think Lucius seemed a little out of character but then again we never really see his interactions with Narcissa in the books so who's to say that he's not like this in the comfort of their own home. It was a very enjoyable read! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and review!! Five hundred word challenges are some of my favorite, they're just a really great dose of inspiration to me!

Thanks for reviewing!
Jami


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