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Review:Maddie says:

You honestly had me laughing throughout the whole chapter - I haven't laughed that much at a chapter in ages! The whole thing was just hilarious and I was planning on writing all my favourite parts and quotes but i'd just end up copy and pasting the entire chapter.

"I had no idea of the concept of a tramp." That's one of the lines I loved the most, in fact the whole Tramp memory was brilliant and I absolutely loved the One Direction reference! All the puns were genius - Trick Lane especially!

Ah, I'm still giggling from the chapter now XD

My favourite character so far has definitely got to be Charlotte - she da bomb. Albus annoys me just as much as he annoys Charlotte. But I'm glad that you've decided to keep their interactions completely hostile and she hasn't acknowledged his "magical green eyes" or "wondrous good looks sculpted by Gods" just yet. A lot of the times peolple tend to do that and that just takes away from the hatred we're supposed to get from them - so great job on that! I love Ian though; his running commentary is highly amusing :)

I really, really love this so far - I'm definitely going to be keeping an eye out for it!

~Maddie x

Author's Response: OHMYMERLIN THANK YOU.

I was worried it wasn't as good as the last one but, alas, you have put my fears to rest. Awrh you're actually too kind.

I'm so glad someone caught onto the puns ;) Haha had to put some 1D in there. Yeppers, if you live in Londre (like i'm assuming you do) the Trick Lane thing would make sense :D


Hahah charlie will be so pleased to be called da bomb. She's never be da bomb b4, ev3! Haha yes. It's pure hatred at the mo. We aren't having any of that mushy greek god stuff until the apocalypse arrives.

And Ian loves you too ;)

We need more kind Maddies in the world *sniffle*. Thank you for the lovely second review!

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