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Review:Maddie says:
I've only read a chapter so far and I can already tell this is going to be an amazing story! I love Charlotte - her train of thought is frighteningly similar to mine (hehe) and your style of writing to potray her is really funny and entertaining. And I always love a Slytherin main character :)

Charlie (can I call her Charlie? Charlie ma Bezzie Mate aha.) is so obviously flawed, it's refreshing. I can't wait to see her grow throughout the story, though I have a feeling her hot temper's going to cause some interesting situations!

Scorpius seems sweet and Ian's your typical boyish cousin - I can definitely relate to the heart stopping, eye twitching sweat patch moment! *Shudders*

I'm looking forward to more Charlotte/Albus confrontations; I lurv me a good, sharp tongued battle of the wits ;) Ooh hair in flames? That's gonna singe...

Fantabulous first chapter! Now...onwards to the next!

~Maddie x

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Haha. I wanted to make Charlie very normal so i added a few of my traits on to her. Same! I'm a lil' tired of all these good doing perfect Gryffindors!

yes, by all means call her charlie and yes you can be her bezzeh. By god, does she need some friends.

Yeppers, this story will be about Charlie's growth all littered with some crazy situations. Be prepared for some cray- poo to go down.

Awrh Scorpy and Ian are bbz, aren't they? Haha I get that moment a lot but more with dirty, vomiting babies :)

WOOP WOOP. GO ALBUS/CHARLIE CONFRONTATIONS. who doesn't love 'em, eh?

Ohhh i see what you did there ;)

SINGE- SINGED.

Thank you for leaving such a lovely review!


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