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Review:harrypotterforever24 says:
Hi! I just started reading your story and I really like it! I always love James/Lily stories with big twists in them, like this one. I think you've developed all the characters' personalities really well, especially since it's only been 7 chapters (I LOVE James, btw xD). I think that Lily and James's relationship is going at the right pace. I hate it when it goes too fast, because it seems like they don't know each other at all. Also, I love it when Lily bonds with the other Marauders, so this chapter was fun to read :D. I enjoy your writing style as well. The only thing I would suggest is making the chapters longer. I think they are a good length though, and especially this chapter, but I suppose I just prefer long chapters xD But other than that, I love your story so far!
And as for Remus's idea about the memory charm, I don't really know. Wouldn't she have to be extremely powerful to modify the memory of everyone at Hogwarts, and even the teachers? It could be some alternate form of a memory charm I suppose. Initially, I thought it might be some sort of powerful potion. But! I am curious to know what the real thing is! So update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!! I'm so glad that you like it and your kind words made me smile. I tried to really stretch out the relationship between Lily and James at a realistic pace, so I'm glad you noticed that! I must admit that I LOVE the other Marauders. I always think that it's important that Lily is close to them since they're all like brothers to James. Again, thank you for the beautiful review and for the suggestion you made!

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