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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Among this fighting mass was one lone figure that was focused on getting out of the war zone and not on fighting enemies.

^ That was one of my favorite parts. I really liked it because it's so true. I feel like people see Narcissa as a coward but the thing is she never really chose a side. Sure she was on her husbands side but really she was on the side that would keep her family safe. I think blood purity obviously mattered to her but I don't think she would have been that hurt over Voldemort's fall and sharing a world with more muggleborns if it meant she could be with her husband and son.

You really took me on quite an adventure. It switched so easily that I did a little jump and was like, "He's drinking milk now? Oh wait! Different time!"

I love reading pieces where Draco is a child so the image of him drinking his milk and Narcissa watching him lovingly was really heart warming.

I also like that you made Narcissa attached to her husband even though he isn't really there. I read a lot of stories and they write the two as not being in love. I think they were, it's just Lucius was dug in so deeply he didn't realize how much he was harming her than helping her.

Nice job! I need to read more of these entries for the task still...I'm so behind! :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

I am glad that it was one of your favourite parts - I really wanted to convey the difference between Narcissa and the other fighters, and I am happy that sentence did it so well.

Yes, I agree with you, people see her as a coward, but she was always neutral (at least in my eyes). I am so happy to know that you share the same views as mine when it comes to Narcissa - and that my story reinforced them.

Haha thank you, I like switching scenes, I feel it brings more drama, and its good to know that you enjoyed it in a way.

I am glad that you liked the milk drinking scene, it was a way for me to convey Narcissa's motherly love =)

Yeah, well I have always felt that they were in love but it sort of faded away, and that's how I write them in my stories too.

Thank you so much once again for your sweet review, I am happy you enjoyed my story :)



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