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Review:Elenia says:
Passing the parcel ^^

Ooh, this was so beautiful and heartwrenching! Such a bittersweet story! And what's even more amazing is that you managed to tell such a story in only a one-shot! That was just... wow!

I really like how mature you've made them both. The fact that they actually understand that what they are doing is wrong and that they need to stop it makes me like this even more. I hate it when some people make it sound like cheating is perfectly fine.

I'm not the biggest fan of flashbacks (even though I've used them myself too) but I think yours worked really well! The transition between the flashback and the present moment was perfect and it all just fit. So well done!

Teddy's 'speech' broke my heart! I really wanted him to just somehow manage to divide himself so he could be with both of them ^^

Well done. Such an amazing one-shot! You really are a talented writer and I really hope I'll find some time to read more of your stories! Especially if they're as brilliant as this one!

Keep up the good work!

~Elenia

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for picking this story to read and review. It's one of the closest to me =)

I am glad that you found this beautiful, heartwrenching, and bittersweet, as that's what I wanted it to be.

I am happy that you like how I have crafted both of them as mature characters, and I agree with you - cheating is not at all fine.

I am really glad that you found my flashback fitting when you are not fond of flashbacks much.

Aw, I wanted Teddy to do that too, sadly it can't be done. I am thrilled that you could feel the emotions I wanted to convey!

I am so flattered that you find me a talented writer, and want to come back to read more of my stories. I'll be honoured to receive more reviews from you!

Thanks so much for the wonderful review once again =)


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