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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Pass the Parcel!

Aw this was a very sweet story. I really liked reading it. I am not much of a Teddy/Victoire fan, preferring Teddy/Dom instead, but this was a story that appealed to me. I like the way you showed the transition of their relationship - from childhood friends to lovers to husband and wife. It was really very sweet. The song lyrics you used were also quite fitting for the story too. I also love how Remus/Tonks had a place in this story. It was all very well woven.

All in all, good characterization, good plot, wonderful flow, and nice ending! Good work!

9/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey there.

I love Teddy and Victoire and as soon as I heard this song I knew it was the song for them. I wanted to show the progression and I think the song showed that well.

Thank you so much


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