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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Pass the parcel.

Lol, this was a cute fic. It was a little cliche, but well cliche is the middle name of Dramione. I am a Dramione fan myself and I enjoyed reading it. If you could fix the formatting issues (spacing) it would be a more pleasant read though =)
Rest, I liked the fic. Perhaps you could have given a little more insight into Draco and Hermione's past and relationship development, it would have been a nice addition to the fic. Draco's son was very cutely written and made me smile. The plot lacked a little substance though, and I would have liked more detail.
However, apart from that, you wrote this quite nicely. Good effort, there is surely room for improvement!

I hope I wasn't too harsh!

7/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: AditiDraco95,

Wow, I forget this story is even on here. This was my first attempt at a one-shot. I hope I can expand my one-shot abilities from this point.

I have such issues with spacing on this site. I think I have almost figured it out.

Thank you for the review.

Megthechef43 aka Meg


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