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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Ah! Such an awesome first chapter! I've always wanted to read a story about Louis because, in my head, he's a really interesting character. So I'm gad your story has kept him that way.

So far, I think you're doing a wonderful job with all the humour. The conversations between the characters were very entertaining and the little scene between Louis and Tam in the end was so well-written.

I also really like the characters so far. Even though this is the first chapter, you've managed to give us a good glimpse at some of the characters. I think you've introduced them in a rather smooth manner, without being overbearing with details and boring introductions. I have a thing for stories that lunge straightforward into the action -I'm yet to see one that has a kiss in chapter one, though!

I would love to read the following chapter and see what's going to happen to Tam this summer! Great job and good luck with the rest of the story!

-Manno

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for the review! Sorry that it took me a while to answer to it.

Humor seems to be my forte, so you can be assured that there will be some throughout this story. I'm aiming it to be a happy-go-lucky story with a touch of romance and adventure. =)

I like to read very action centered stories myself, so writing those comes naturally to me. What I actually dread to write are the chapters with long meaningful discussions. But I'll cross that bridge when I come into it.

Thanks! This story will hopefully continue soonish. =)

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