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Review:Shortie says:
There are so many things I disapprove in this story.

1) Harry was the one who asked Cedric to take the cup with him.
2) Harry never told Cho about Cedric's death. That's one of the reasons they broke up.

I'll story there. But here's the deal. these are Cho's thoughts so whatever injustice she's doing to anyone in her mind's eye, it's perfectly fair. She has lost the love of her life and she didn't know what happened. It was a very brief relationship. She has all the right in the world to blame Harry. The fact that she likes Harry (Or liked) gives her more justice, because she's trying to drive away all these weird feelings for Harry.

My point? You've done an excellent job. I mean, you've really really gone inside Cho's head. i did find one or two typos but those can be redone easily. The real Ravenclaw in her and her inner thoughts were all perfectly portrayed. And the prompts were smoothly put in.

Well done love :)


Author's Response: I think you might be the only person who's truly understood the perspective of this story! I know I made a LOT of canon mistakes, but it was entirely purposeful, you're right. Cho isn't going to be thinking rationally- she isn't brave, she wants to blame everyone around her just to make herself feel better. She wants to feel self-pity and cry and do whatever it takes to be able to carry on. And yes, I had to show her Ravenclaw traits in there :D

Thanks for this review, you seemed to really understand my writing here! *also hugs* x

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