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Review:manno_malfoy says:
This has been a very interesting read! Only recently I've started reading Lucius/Narcissa stories and I'm glad I got the chance to read yours.

In the beginning, considering the way you began the story, I was a little worried that you were summarising Narcissa's experiences with Lucius. Yet, after a while, when we finally came to know that Narcissa's pregnant, things began to fall into place and I understood that you were setting the scene with enough details so we can understand Narcissa's feelings and reactions.

Speaking of those... I think you've written a perfect Narcissa here. It seems as though you really know her and know what's going on in her head and how she feels. She seemed to be so in-character, and I really admire that.

I was sad to see Lucius cheat on Narcissa, especially when he knew that she was hurt the very same way once before. But I really do love these two!

This is a really nice one-shot! Great job and keep on writing!

-Manno

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

I am happy you liked my story overall, and glad that you realized I wasn't summarising Narcissa's experiences with Lucius. That sounds quite boring xP

Perfect Narcissa really? Aw thank you so much. I am flattered that you find her in-character.

I am glad you liked my story. Thank you!


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