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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Pass the Parcel!

I rarely read Founder's Era, but this one just intrigued me so that I came here to read it. I have to say, I don't regret reading this at all =)

I liked your characterization of Helena, I think you wrote her very well. I could see the canon "grey lady" in Helena which is a great thing to achieve in your writing.

Her relationship with Will was well portrayed too, and I have a feeling that it will developed very nicely as the story progresses. The part about Will putting Helena to sleep was very cute too, it gave a nice touch to the story.

All in all, I really liked reading this. Your plot and characterizations are very good, and your narrative flows really well. Good work!

Keep writing!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Awww thanks AD :D this my first ever Founders attempt also :D

Thank you so much ad. I hope you come back and read this when updated (Which should be soon) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :D

*Hugs*


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