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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey! Pass the parcel~

Aw I really liked this! I've never seen a story like this before, so it was really fresh and unique. I wasn't sure what to expect with the summary - three little pigs meeting Harry Potter, but I love the parallel between the tale of the three brothers and the three little pigs. The way you wrote it was really fantastic and so cleverly done too. I loved how Voldemort was the bad guy and how you pretty much stuck to canon with this story. It was so clever of you to combine their three hallows with the houses - so, having a wand make the house, the stone make the house, and the invisible house. I also really liked how Voldemort says the same thing each time - just like in the fairytale we know and the repetition of wave and curse was really effective.

A really clever idea for a story and executed well too! Nicely written - I enjoyed this! :)
- Charlotte

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you liked it!
I tried to keep the bare bones of the story the same so I'm glad you thought the repetition was effective.
Thanks for reviewing! :)


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