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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
You have nothing to worry about with this one shot! It was absolutely fabulous!

I had never really considered another reason for Remus to refuse being with Tonks before but this is very interesting as it offers another point of view which I have never even considered let alone read about before.

I found it really interesting that you made it so Remus had injured the love of his life before and the worst that he could have imagined had now happened and that is a lot for even the most unfeeling person to get their head round let alone a sensitive person like Remus.

Your beginning seemed to me to be very ominous with his refusal of Tonks. Then going into a very idyllic scene with Remus and the unnamed girl. It just seemed to be telling us what had happened without actually saying it you know! I love the way you also made the scene almost perfect but then when the full moon appeared you showed both of them to be really scared.

I could never have imagined Remus doing something like this even before the Wolfsbane potion, it just seems so OOC but it just shows that it can actually happen.

I'm glad you included what happened when he did get with Tonks though. It just rounded the whole story off and helped to seriously improve my state of mind but it also helped me imagine Remus back in his character in his sweet and sensitive self!

Well done

Author's Response: Hey!

Aw thank you so much! That really means a lot to me and I'm so glad you thought so!

Yep, I think that's why I was intrigued to writing this story - I wanted to develop some kind of backstory for the reason why Remus was so hesitant and against being with Tonks. I've never thought of myself as a particularly original writer, so to hear that you've never read something like this before was great!

The OOC is something that a few reviewers have commented on, and perhaps it is just slightly unrealistic, but I'm glad that you nevertheless thought that it could happen. And yay! I'm so pleased to hear that the ending worked out well!

Thank you so much for reading and for the really lovely review! It really put a smile on my face. :)
- Charlotte

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