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Review:Whimsical Diva says:
Ah. It all makes sense now - the hints and little details peppered though out the chapters.

Anyway, this was great. I'm glad there's going to be more and I'd have been staggered if there wasn't, since there's so much more that can be explored. I doubt Cal and Nat will be able to salvage their relationship, Cal's infidelity notwithstanding. Curiously enough, Jen and Doyle look like the real deal. And as for Tanith and Tobias... I suppose it'll be interesting to see how they'll manoeuvre their way through a normal relationship and everyday life.

All in all, this was an outstanding fic. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Good that the "and this is what was going on all along" revelation worked. I try to avoid them from being clunky while you don't want to slow down the action earlier with a big exposition, so it's finding where to shove it in! But I hope Gabe's explanation of, well, everything works.

If there hadn't been a sequel, there would have been more chapters to Shadow - but when I decided on a sequel I thought I'd end it where Deathly Hallows ends it, and cover the aftermath as one self-contained story. But yes, you'll have to read on to see the fates of the various couples, you have indeed accurately identified the problems needing overcoming!

Thank you a whole bunch for your support and your feedback. It's always been appreciated and always been a motivator.


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