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Review:Shortie says:
Currently invading her personal space. Haha epic *shakes head*

This is very VERY cliche. But hey, it's Dramione. Cliche is always a thumbs up. Hehe Dramione is my second favourite ship. Used to be first but now second. I've read so many of these so my reviews are dad honest.

As usual, your grammar and all are perfect. No issue there. And my my! Going for it in the middle of the office *shakes head* shame on you :P hehe

This is a perfect dramione one shot. No need of me to tell look at all the reviews. But hey, let's get serious.

I like the fact that you didn't make it like, Draco's head over heels in love with Hermione. that would have been too much. But the cliche smoochy areas are just right so yay you.

But personally, I think you're better at Lucius/Narcissa. Bring that aspect into this a bit. Bring that style... You know?

Other than that you're fine ;)

*Hugs*

Author's Response: Hello shortie! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Haha, thank you. I know it was cliche, but oh well I love Dramione cliches xP I am glad for your honest reviews =)

Haha, your comments really make me laugh xD

I am glad you liked it overall. And of course Lucius/Narcissa (angst) rocks xD It's my top too, and well it would be a bit hard to bring that style in Dramione, but I'll try.

Thank you!


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