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Review:Grammar Freak says:
So I decided to wait until the end of the chapters thus far to review. Overall, I enjoy the story, though some of the writing seems to be a bit juvenile, but that's acceptable assuming your age to be late teens. The story is far more enjoyable than not.

My most important comment here, WHICH I THINK YOU SHOULD DEEPLY CONSIDER, is finding yourself a betareader (or just beta). They are there to help you read over your work and critique it for spelling, grammar, contextual, and other such errors before you post the story for the general public. And not to be unkind, but you my friend, have several spelling/grammar errors. And your story gets to be a bit repetitive in places, and a beta can help you paraphrase words or ideas as to make them seem more original.

That's it. Overall, good story. :]

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