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Review:ladymontgomery says:
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO MUCH LIKE ROMEO AND JULIET IT'S RIDICULOUS! Well sort of...if it revolved around the Next Generation but seriously this is like the perfect mix between Romeo and Juliet and Harry Potter. I mean it sort of all fits in perfectly. I mean James is even "Juliet's" cousin. I mean making Mercutio "Mercutio" was a bit obvious but ehhh I aint complaining. I do like that you did mix it up at bit with the whole rise of "The Heir" but I can only wait sadly for Scorpius's untimely demise.

*Sob* James dies. I actually still don't hate him as a character, perhaps because he's not as rude as the original Tybalt...but it may just be the fact that I love James's character(albeit he is very rash and obnoxious in other novels as well) in general. Maybe other novels have made me biased lol.

Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks so much! I wanted to give you all a warning of what was going to happen, so I retained Mercutio's name. I thought the story fitted so perfectly to Romeo and Juliet that I had to do it!

The rise of the heir, I thought was a way to jazz up the story, and it also tied off what I saw as a lose end for I thought the most unmentioned deatheater of them all.

And I didn't dislike James either, he was just an arrogant teenage boy! If you like this stories, please try my other's! I have a Tom/Merope, a Andromeda/Ted and a Founders story that I feel are my best work!

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