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Review:marissa lily potter says:
I think it's so unique the way you start off with a quote for every chapter. It's not done very often but I think it's very effective so I really hope you continue doing that. Also, I have to compliment you on your choice of quotes! They all fit so wonderfully with the contents of each chapter. They're inspiring to and if I didn't know any better, I'd say that the quotes were inspiration for you. I mean, they'd definitely be inspiration for me haha.

But going on with the story. I love Lindsey! She is so sweet and independent but I can see that she's also vulnerable and that's what makes her human. She's like everyone else but special in her own way and I love how you've done that with her! She's definitely one of the most interesting and unique characters I have come across in fanfictions. Where did you get the inspiration for her?

I also love how close James and Lindsey are, just like real life siblings, or well some anyway. I think that James is the sweet, caring type and if he did have a sister, he would be very careful and protective of her so it's nice to see that. James and Lindsey are pretty cute. They understand each other without saying much which is absolutely amazing.

I really don't know what to think of Sirius quite yet. Not in a bad way of course! He's just... mysterious and very interesting. With him, it's like a guessing game. I have no clue what's going to happen next and I love every moment of that feeling. You're an extremely talented writer and this chapter was amazing!

Great work and it's always a pleasure reviewing for you! :D

-Marissa

Author's Response: Aw, shucks. You make me blush. I usually find the quote about halfway through the writing process. I'm glad that you like them because they really do influence the chapter a great deal. I think I kind of dropped the ball on my quotes, but I intend to stick them in there when I have editing time. I'm glad that you like Lindsey. It's always worrying for me because I had to make her James's sister in order for things to work. Luckily, no one has thrown rotten fruit at me for it yet. lol. I was inspired by another of my OC's who is.just mean and confused. I wanted the mild, damaged side of that character to come to light-even if it was in a completely different story. lol.
Yeah, Sirius is weird in this story. It's hard to tell if he's going to make a joke or try to kill someone. Heck, sometimes I'm not sure what he'll do, if that makes sense. lol.
Thank you so much for this AMAZING review. I'm coming back for more. And i'll be tackling more of your story once I can recharge my typing batteries. My fingers hurt. lol
Hugs!!
Lucky

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