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Review:marissa lily potter says:
Hey there, marissa lily potter here with the review you requested!

Ahhh, this was another great chapter! Usually, I'm not a fan of James Potter having a sister because that's something I really like to stick to canon with but you've got me loving Lindsey. She's sweet and charming. My only concern is that she doesn't have a definite character yet. I'd like for her to be more descriptive, y'know?

Speaking of description, I think a little bit of imagery would help to catch the reader's attention better. Describing scenes will create a setting and mood. It will also grasp at the reader's attention better which you don't seem to have a problem doing but the imagery would only make that firmer.

I love this story. I don't know where it's going but I am very excited to see just that. I can't wait to see more from you and I'm so happy that you requested a review from me. Thank you so much for that!

-Marissa

Author's Response: Yes, you must have review enhancing drugs on you. ;) Thank you so much for allowing my shameless requesting. Your reviews are delightful. And I'm getting you back. *mwahaha* Be afraid. :D And I never really thought to add much imagery because I get carried away with it, but I think you're right. *shuffles feet* I'm pretty excited to tacklepounce your stories, so I'm going to get to it.
Thank you for the helpful and lovely review!!
Hugs,
Lucky


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